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Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Fascinating how you write such compelling stories in poem-form! 😳👍🏻

Jen Vision's avatar

Thank you so much !😊

Anthony Ledger's avatar

I immediately had an image in my head of why he was so terrified of that one clock going out. Fantastic

Jen Vision's avatar

Ohh that’s great, thank you so much!

elie lichtschein 👽🛹's avatar

yes same!! so eeries and spot-on

elie lichtschein 👽🛹's avatar

love this poetic style!! great stuff

Jen Vision's avatar

Thank you so much!!

Brok3n Engines's avatar

Dactylic tetrameter! Very cool!

This reminded me of Death in Terry Pratchett's Discworld, though he uses hourglasses.

Jen Vision's avatar

Thank you so much !