THE DEATHCLOCKS
When the clocks stop ticking, it's too late.
Deep in a shop on a crooked street
where rain and darkness always meet
an old clockmaker worked alone
among the gears and aged stone.
A sound would echo through the night
like little heartbeats dressed in fright.
A thousand clocks upon the wall
would breathe and tick in endless call.
TIK TAK...
He wound each dial with shaking hands
adjusted springs and rusted bands.
For every clock inside the room
was tied to someone’s living doom.
The villagers would always speak
of why the old man looked so weak.
Or why at every stroke of ten
he’d rush to wind the clocks again.
For if a single clock should fail
then somewhere, someone’s life would pale.
Their final breath, their final cry
and in that moment, they would die.
One winter night the thunder roared
like angry gods outside the door.
While every clock began to shake
as though the earth itself would break.
TIK TAK…
TIK TAK…
TIK…
TAK…
One little clock began to slow
it's fragile hands moved weak and low.
The old man turned as pale as bone
and whispered, “Oh… not this one… no…”.
He grabbed his tools with frantic dread
cold beads of sweat rolled down his head.
His trembling fingers fought the chain
while all the clocks screamed through the rain.
TIK TAK!
TIK TAK!
The tiny seconds would not wait
the slowing tick became fate.
Then suddenly the clock stood still
the shop itself grew deathly chill.
Silence.
And from the darkness of the hall
one final knock came through the wall.
The old man closed his weary eyes
for somewhere far away, one dies.
Then softly from the corner black
another clock began:
TIK TAK…
TIK TAK…




Fascinating how you write such compelling stories in poem-form! 😳👍🏻
I immediately had an image in my head of why he was so terrified of that one clock going out. Fantastic